Expression of warmth
Something you hide as it's debt
Your mirth; it's your smile!
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Thank you for reading it. I guess the thrill of Haiku poems is that you can draw many different reflections from a few words. It can always be seen from many different perspectives.
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About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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This one made made me feel warm and free. Love how you described the joyful feeling here.
Outstanding girl.
There you go Maryam - you will be addicted now!
Magnificent piece! It seems like you're capturing the complexity of emotions, where warmth and joy are visible on the outside, but deeper, more complex feelings may be kept in the background. Great work sister ✨