The Day I die 2.0
The day I die, but for the betrayer!
The Day I die, I want to spy
'Short-time', I did spend, but it didn't say my end
I'd see who'd weep— who'd be weak on their knee
To witness your regret! You’ll tremble, filled with sweat.
Who'd stay? Who'd go? It'll be like a show!
If you're sad that I quit, find my words that I hid...
What happened to me if you'd ask! Come on, now! Take off your mask
To see your eyes open wide, I've seen your face— What is it to hide?
I know that day who'd be SAD, you know too, it'll be my DAD
Oh wow! I flew at such young age' It's good I'm free from your cage
My soul wants those letters to burn, I'm gone— And now, It's your turn!!
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Author's note;
Hi, Thank you so much for reading it. Also, this poem has nothing to do with my personal life. I wrote it just out of nowhere. And my personal opinions aren't involved in this poem. This poem reflects a person who predicts their after-death scene. The person may be a HURT ONE!
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (7)
This is a beautifully written and very emotive poem.
Ohh! Dear congratulations on the Honourable Mention.🤗🎉 You've done amazing job😍
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention on this week's leaderboard for Most Discussed Stories with this piece! Well done!
Wow, this was deep. I love it though, you know how to provoke real emotions from your readers. You are an excellent writer.
Oh! This truly leaves a deep impact on my mind. The way you've pulled out words with such depth is remarkable, even though this isn't related to your personal life. But perhaps this is connected to the life of anyone lying on their deathbed, waiting for death. Perhaps what you're trying to say is that after a person dies, they want to see the truth- who was deceiving them and who truly loved them. An amazing poem, my dear sister.😌✨💥
Batool, you are still young, why are you like this? I wish you a long life of good work.
This is very heart touching.. honestly Your writing is exceptional