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It all comes with a lesson

Day 4/30: A series where I write a poem every single day for 30 days.

By Maryam BatoolPublished 6 months ago 1 min read

A breaking soul resonates with misery

And breaking silence does weigh vulnerability

A broken heart feels broken people

And shattered soul embraces shattered pieces

Heartbreak and anguish, desolation and torment

Grind hearts raw with a clear perception

I know— nothing comes without a lesson

Heartbreak proves to be more than a blessin'

It leaves footprints of morals to learn

Of path that might lead us to right

They say bearing is the hardest part

Sometimes it might affect the tiny heart

But He says He doesn't burden a soul more than

More than it can bear, or it can mend

I'll decipher the lesson in the bitterness of this pain

What if the coded ache leaves me with gains?

Maybe the heartache wasn't all in vain!

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Thanks for reading ya'll! <3

Stream of Consciousnesssurreal poetryFree Verse

About the Creator

Maryam Batool

I'm 17

I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others

Ready to let my writing bloom!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran6 months ago

    But it would be so nice if we could gain without pain. Loved your poem!

  • Rowan Finley 6 months ago

    Wow! 😮 this line/question brings such a punch 🤛 “ What if the coded ache leaves me with gains?” Great job! 👏🏻

  • Karan w. 6 months ago

    This is very deep and beautiful; there’s so much in it that one can reflect on deeply. Powerful!!

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