Don't Lose your spark for them
Day 3/30: A series where I write a poem every single day for 30 days.
YOU spent your life wondering, 'WHAT they would think?'
And THEY become nobody—Nobody in a blink!
THEY don't care what you do, no worries, no clue
You're self-troubling yourself, losing what shines through
You were sent here to seek, to learn, to explore
Lost vision to find, destiny, and so much more
Feeling anxious inside and worrying about THEM
Why won't you understand? You have a hidden GEM
This finally proves one thing, you don't love YOU
And If you actually do, why doesn't it sound true?
Why don't we try to ACT, the way our hearts speak
Why not remove the shield and scream, "We aren't weak"?
People create, they mock, but ultimately THEY die
Why are you losing YOUR SPARK, just WHY?
Let them say what they say, do your thing—it's your DAY
Don't lose your spark for them, for them do not STAY
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Author's note:
Thanks a bunch for reading ya'll :)
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (3)
Nicely done, Maryam. Asks some very valid questions about self-opinion.
Every line of this carries a bitter truth, and the poem is both inspiring and energizing. the level of your poetry and thoughts has risen by each one, it's brilliant! 👏
"People create, they mock, but ultimately THEY die" Yup, eventually they die. But if you feel that day isn't coming fast enough, you can do it for them 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved your poem!