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Intimacy Ratios

And math that couldn’t be taught

By The Dani WriterPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Beyond any doubt

you will not break my heart

but instead

reduce it to microscopic shreds past recognition

Quivering cardiac pulses

that feel eternity loss

from love-scraped cords not easily relinquished

A future that looms inevitable

does nothing to dissuade

and mathematics

the basis of scientific principle

lies comatose before me

as a day

a week

a decade

without hesitation

I'd surrender

to possess this ratio of unequal terms

There are unions beyond yearning

and such irrepressible force of bond

where heavens kneel

in supplication

and weep

for redress of torn spheres

and seclusion

for timeless ties divine born

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Kindest thanks to you for reading all the words I did not say for the "Things You Can't Say Out Loud" Vocal Challenge.

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Phenomenal writing Dani!

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Heartwrenching!!! Well done, SSS!!!

  • L.C. Schäfer5 months ago

    Like it's been put into a really powerful blender, and just as messy!

  • Imola Tóth5 months ago

    I often felt how you describe it, after a heartbreak - like my heart wasn't actually broken but shrunk into microscopic size I can't even recognize anymore. You phrased this poem so beautifully ❤️

  • D.K. Shepard6 months ago

    From the title to the final line this is just stunning! You've got the minutia and the cosmic well in hand! Beautiful work!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡6 months ago

    I love it, Dani. Tugs at the soul. ⚡💙⚡

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    Excellent structure with lots to ponder Dani. Lovingly done! 😊 👏

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