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Don't shed the blindness,
Innocence will fade the first,
Life is only last.
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Rachel Steinmetz
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Comments (4)
Very true words!
The lines seem to be a meditation on the inevitable loss of innocence as we age. Awesome ✨✨
This makes me think of the magic of Christmas for some reason and how it becomes less magical once you stop believing in Santa. Anyway - I thought it was stunning. Happy Holidays to you.
This has a real mysterious feel to it! The way you capture innocence slipping away and the notion of life being the only constant is striking. It’s short but packs a lot of depth!