From depths of emerald, where waters embrace the sky,
A phoenix rose, with spirit soaring high.
Indonesia, a tapestry woven with grace,
Unfurled its wings, in freedom's embrace.

Centuries of slumber, under colonial night,
A people yearned for dawn, with all their might.
The Dutch empire's shadow, cast a heavy hand,
But seeds of rebellion, were sown in the land.
Sukarno's voice, a thunderclap, a call to rise,
Hatta's wisdom, guiding through hopeful skies.
On August seventeenth, a promise was made,
A nation reborn, where courage prevailed.
With hearts aflame, they fought for liberty's shore,
Against the colonizers, they waged endless war.
From jungles to cities, their spirits did soar,
A symphony of courage, forevermore.
Independence won, a battle hard fought,
But challenges loomed, as victory was sought.
Economic strife, and political strain,
Tested the nation's resolve, again and again.
Yet, from the ashes, a phoenix would soar,
Economic growth, a vision to explore.
Diversity embraced, a cultural blend,
Unity in strength, a nation to defend.
Through trials and triumphs, the journey endures,
A nation evolving, with hopes and with cures.
Corruption's shadow, a blight on the land,
But progress marches on, with a steadfast hand.
The spirit of '45, a beacon of light,
Ignites the soul, with renewed might.
To build a nation, just, fair, and free,
Where every citizen, finds destiny.
With challenges looming, and dreams yet to chase,
Indonesia stands tall, in time's endless race.
A nation of promise, a people united,
In unity's strength, their future ignited.
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Moharif Yulianto
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This was a great read. Love the flow of it. And an excellent story about independence.
Good poem, looking forward to reading more ☺