Indecision: A moment of mental mayhem
A free-style acrostic about a trip inside my brain at a strange time
Disordered, I say my thoughts are.
I see the options before me
Stood precariously like boulders on a ledge.
Trusting myself and my decisions,
Releasing my thoughts into being,
Am I sure that's wise?
Control, confidence, I possess these things.
That's what I am supposed to say.
In me is the potential to be great!
Or shall I greet the disaster looming?
No, I think I will have that side of bacon with my eggs and toast, thank you.
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Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it – and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith6 days ago in Humor
Comments (14)
I absolutely understand this feeling, always get the bacon 😂
Haha I can get dramatic about these decisions too. Something as simple as breakfast can set off the vibe for the rest of the day. Great work!
Fabulously written!!! Can smell the bacon & eggs!!! Loved it!!!❤️💕
Nice poem. The Change in the tone at the end was perfectly placed…. And now I want toast…😅
This is so good! The twist of the last line is amazing!
Sorry I hadn't read yours , this is excellent
Oooo, this was so lighthearted and fun! Brilliantly executed acrostic!
Mmm, Breakfast 🍳 😁❤️❗
Breakfast of champions 😁
Clever, I really enjoyed this! I love the ending and it made me quite hungry 🤗❤️
Hahaha this was a fun one, Ian!
My kind of decision! Well done!
Love this and I feel the exact thing often!
Who can resist bacon and eggs anyway? They are good for the soul! LOL! I enjoyed the humor in this piece.