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Drifting on a cloud
She holds the world when she dreams
At night as she sleeps
About the Creator
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Comments (3)
So much tenderness and expression of potential in so few words 😁
This felt very peaceful. Beautiful poem!
Lovely absolutely lovely!!!♥️♥️💕