Love, I’ve fallen ill again.
I’m in need of your medicine.
Come and place your healing hands on me.
Baby, be my remedy.
Prescribe me some of your oxytocin.
Boost my serotonin.
I need a full dosage to fight this diagnosis.
Won’t you stay a moment?
Lend me your love potion.
Well chosen.
You got all the right components.
You keep my heart in motion.
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Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it – and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith3 days ago in Humor
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