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A poem

A poem about a poem

By Maya Or TzurPublished a day ago 1 min read
A poem
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”It’s too much words”,

It says,

“Too much words.”

“Do you want less?”

I asked,

“Why is there too much words?”

“That’s how I feel - I feel heavy. The words feel heavy.”

“Isn’t the content heavy?…”

I responded, feeling annoyed with the poem.

“Well, yes… no… also. But the words feel heavy.”

“Gotcha. I’ll trim.”

“Trim, trim, what’s a rim of a jar, jar, jar filled with honey and-“

“And just who are you now, Winnie the P-“

“Trim, trim, what’s the rim of a-“

Ok, now you’re just trying to tease m-“

“The rim of a jar, jar, oh where’s the yar-“

“But-“

“Yarn, yarn, where’s the yarn, when it’s grim and when it’s dark-“

“We will sew and sew all night,”

“Nightingale and creamy pies,”

“Cry all day and laugh all night,”

“When’s it wrong and when’s it right,״

“When obscured and when - bright,”

“Sing all day and cry all night.”

“Oh! We made another poem,”

Said I,

Now it’s less heavy?”

“Yes.”

And the morning entered through the window.

For FunGratitudeStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Maya Or Tzur

Hey-O!

Just a 26 y.o woman writing 'nd stuff. Articles, poems, prose.

See 'ya, little munchkins! 😊



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  • SAMURAI SAM AND WILD DRAGONSabout 6 hours ago

    WELL DONE

  • Flower InBloomabout 16 hours ago

    Great work! I love it! Keep them coming. You have a knack. Peace & Love young lady.

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