If you were a feeling,
you’d be PEACE, not TURMOIL.
You’d be a MURMUR, not a ROAR.
You’d be ENDURING, not MOMENTARY.
You’d be FLAME, not SMOKE.
You’d be a HAVEN, not a DETOUR.
You’d be CERTAINTY, not HESITATION.
You’d be DEPTH, not SURFACE.
You’d be BELONGING, not WANDERING.
You’d be DAWN, not DUSK.
You’d be an EMBRACE, not A GLANCE.
You’d be GROUNDED, not FICKLE.
You’d be a SYMPHONY, not CLAMOR.
You’d be ETERNAL, not TEMPORARY.
You’d be WHOLE, not BRO KEN.
You’d be everything I SEEK,
not everything I FEAR.
You wouldn’t JUST be a feeling—
you’d be HOME.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (29)
I loved this. The form and those perfect last lines great poetry
Wow! This is a ''symphony, not clamor.'' 🙂
A beautiful expression and reminder that we have the power to choose! Yeah buddy! 💯
Wonderful !!!! You are an exceptional writer and poet!
"You wouldn't just be a feeling, you'd be home" This is amazing! I love how you broke the word bro ken
Aww, lovely! The formatting of the poem makes it really unique, and the cover picture is a great choice too.
I love this Komal - I think we all wish to be loved this way. The power of words to make those we love feel seen is a powerful expression <3
Absolutely striking and speaks to the heart i love this
Now this is a love poem!
This was good so good
you are back..... Nice
loved the contrasts-nicely done
Amazing it really is ⭐️🍀🍀🍀⭐️
Home is definitely where the heart is. Loved your poem!
Wow!! This was powerful! Simple words can be so impactful, words can paint 1000 pictures! 💘🌟
Phew! This looks like it's human content! What a relief!
Not only does this have a warm, wonderful vibe but the rhythm is lovely and cathartic. Very imaginative and well put-together!
Well-wrought! An especially nice touch: BRO KEN. Clever subtleties are always a delight!
I like this kind
Love it!!!! I hung a sign in this house that says, "Home is wherever I am with you." As far as I'm concerned, home isn't four walls and a roof-- it's the person you most adore. I enjoy your style, sweet lady. And that cover photo is gorgeous to the extreme! ⚡💙⚡
This was a very beautiful piece of work. I look forward to reading more from you.
Wow, this is so warm and a testimony of you knowing yourself well enough to know what you desire deep down inside. Very inspiring!
Beautifully written and captures the essence of a deep and enduring connection, Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt piece.
I like how you wrote the word bro ken This is a nice touch for a very nice piece
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