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If tomorrow starts without me

For Kayleigh Fraser's unofficial prompt challenge

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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If tomorrow starts without me

It's going to be okay.

I can't be here forever;

Life doesn't work that way.

But know that even though

You don't see me in your life

That I am ever present

A beacon through the strife.

You need to search your memories

To listen to your heart.

Times will come, you'll feel alone

But we'll never be apart,

Because I live in our life shared;

In everything we've done:

In conversations, trips away,

Football games you've won.

Times we've wrestled, tears that spilled,

Moments of upset.

Making cupcakes, Hallowe'en,

Choosing homes for pets.

Tomorrow will arrive

And I'll be left behind.

But know that I am there, my son,

In a corner of your mind.

There's a place for you to have,

A retreat to give you strength

However you see it in your head

You can talk to me at length.

My voice you'll hear, an echo

Of the times that I've advised

Or reassured or tempered you

Or held you like a vice.

Imagine, then, a scene where

You can visit, like a snug:

Cushioned, full of warmth

That will envelope like a hug.

And we will sit and ruminate

And settle for a while

And you will sense my presence

And the power of my smile.

I'm never gone, I'm always here

Of that there is no doubt.

My earthly light has faded

But is never truly out.

Just reach for me, stretch upwards

To the recess where I'm kept

And you will be suffused with warmth

Just like I never left.

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Dedicated to my boys and inspired by the prompt but also by F Cade Swanson's effort which touched me as a parent and a poet:

The link to Kayleigh's original proposal and her own lovely poem is below. You will also find their links to other poems by other Vocal creators all inspired by the same line. See where visiting takes you.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    What a poignant poem. I only stumbled across this challenge when I read Alexandria Stanwyck‘s poem for the challenge.

  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨about a year ago

    John stole my comment before I got to make it 🥹 This is so heartfelt, Rachel xx

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    There is no poetry quite like a mother’s love. This is a precious gift to your sons, Rachel!

  • My earthly light has faded 😭😭😭😭😭 As an only child, my biggest fear is my parents dying and leaving me. I just don't know how I'm gonna cope with that

  • Kevin Rollyabout a year ago

    Lovely....

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Oh this is so tenderly and beautifully composed! Just incredible, Rachel!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellent piece

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Ah, so lovely and relatable :)

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a year ago

    This is so, so lovely! Makes me think of my Mom - thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh my goodness. That was so beautiful. ❤

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    This was so, so beautiful, Rachel. Your family is lucky to have you ♥️

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    I’m not crying, you’re crying

  • F Cade Swansonabout a year ago

    Beautifully done.

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Beautiful. I especially love this line, "retreat to give you strength". ❤️

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