If our minds are seen 🤪
Then the trouble will be horrifying 🤣🤣🤣
An astounding creation,
By god Nature,
What is that?
Anybody can't read,
The thoughts of anyone,
Nobody can predict them,
I can't see yours,
And you can't see mine,
Imagine, just imagine,
If this is not the case,
Probably I will be thrown out of the house,
But no worries,
I know,
I am not the only black sheep,
Your best friends would slap on,
If they heard the disgusting sound,
Of your mind berates them,
Your girlfriend would break up,
If she read the love quotes,
You bear for other girls,
By unzipping your mind,
You would hack Dharrshee's mind,
And make a top story,
And when she knows it,
She would be ecstatic for copying her fancy,
It is hilarious,
And horrifying too,
When minding beyond the boundaries, isn't it,
So, let's breathe deep,
Inside our limits,
What is so-called,
Our minds aren't seen by others!
** I wanted to tell about general status, so this is invalid to the sacred people who enlightened their lives**
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About the Creator
Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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Review in one word: 'Wow.'
this poem providing a unique perspective on the invisible nature of human cognition...
Thank God, we cannot read others' minds easily. Be sure, nevertheless, that they created technology that can. Excellent work!
This is wild, mad that it didn't get Top Story!
Beautiful! It would indeed be a disaster if our minds could be read by all. 😃
Damn, this is good. But I can read minds through the actions, choices and decisions of humans. Lol.
Nice content
Predictions, a curious 🤔 Idea 💡. Great content.
Enjoyed! I would be in sooooo much trouble if people could read mind. 🧐🤷🏿♀️🥴
This is really entertaining. I'm sure: "If this is not the case, probably I will be thrown out of the house" is true in my case! 😂
No doubt Dharr! Is brilliant but I personally would be frightened for life if I hacked her horror-dominated mind 🤣🤣 Great work in this poem a blend of horror and humor. You are definitely takes notes from the lovely Dharr!
I'm afraid I know Dhar's mind too well. This is so very funny, your writing is so unique.
The contrasting tones of hilarity and horror create an engaging and thought-provoking read, it's an entertaining piece that invites us to reflect on the boundaries and unseen nature of our innermost thoughts, great!
Fine work
beautiful
Hmmm, Great poem.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Dharrsheena is the queen of Top stories!
Hahaha I agree, we need to hack her mind for Top Stories! Dharrsheena. 🤣😂 😂❤️💙💜
Beautiful poem!
Bro I'm glad you didn't mention me..Haha this is a truly a great experimental poetry Esala... Nice composition on feelings...
Great!
Great poem!❤️💖 This would be terrible though if it were real as I have had a glimpse of this in a college study once. I discovered dirty old men. I didn't know that would be the real outcome! 😂😂😂
You have wonderfully penned down each and every line ...it was really my best moment of the day...to read it.....🥇🥇
Your poem deeply resonated with Dharrsheena's thoughts and feelings. Loved your poem!
best
very good⭐