Rain drops with a wow perspective
Nature, mystery and inspiration

Creations by the Sky,
To give life to the sleeping earth,
Woven with the name 'water drops',
And sent as letters,
The whispers sky didn't unfold to the earth,
Are one by one with the drops,
One by one fall in a queue,
Split up on the earth
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It written on a drop,
About war wizards in the sky,
On another drop it spread,
The amorous notes about peace,
"War, a beast even in the sky" say drops,
What's more, peace - a goddess in the sky
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Here, scoop about a crush dawn of love,
Happening at the edge of the multiverse,
As well, news on a sprout indifference,
Of a 60-year-old love,
Bed of roses - embellished for the calf love,
Florets-of-indifference - flash escaping the bed of roses
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Water is down streaming,
Damping the earth by kissing and kissing,
Revealing the entire gossip,
Whittling the effort of the sky
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Creations by the Sky,
To give life to the sleeping earth,
Woven with the name 'water drops',
And sent as letters,
The whispers sky didn't unfold to the earth,
Are one by one with the drops,
One by one fall in a queue,
Split up on the earth.
About the Creator
Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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Comments (42)
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Beautiful! You never know who rain is going to hit, as it hits everyone the same.
Excellent work, Esala! Very profound words!
Nature is very inspiring and holds many messages. I love how you used raindrops.
It’s interesting how water holds messages. This is a great read thank you.
Nature can be very inspiring.
Beautiful.
Amazing!
I love your poems
It's a very beautiful poem. Very enlightening. Great piece, keep up the good work peace
delightful poetry
it's a delicate and thoughtful meditation on how even the smallest elements in nature carry profound stories....
super...
That's beautiful! Congratulations on the text. I love rain.
Good work
Nice work. The cycle of life and the unification with earth and universe. Very deep.
This poem beautifully captures the dance between the sky and the earth through water drops. Keep it up!
LOVELY
Beautiful
Lovely, beautiful work!
Super
Expressing feeling.
Wonderfully written
Great
I love that line where the drops split upon the earth.