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Rain drops with a wow perspective

Nature, mystery and inspiration

By Esala GunathilakePublished 2 years ago 1 min read

Creations by the Sky,

To give life to the sleeping earth,

Woven with the name 'water drops',

And sent as letters,

The whispers sky didn't unfold to the earth,

Are one by one with the drops,

One by one fall in a queue,

Split up on the earth

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It written on a drop,

About war wizards in the sky,

On another drop it spread,

The amorous notes about peace,

"War, a beast even in the sky" say drops,

What's more, peace - a goddess in the sky

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Here, scoop about a crush dawn of love,

Happening at the edge of the multiverse,

As well, news on a sprout indifference,

Of a 60-year-old love,

Bed of roses - embellished for the calf love,

Florets-of-indifference - flash escaping the bed of roses

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Water is down streaming,

Damping the earth by kissing and kissing,

Revealing the entire gossip,

Whittling the effort of the sky

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Creations by the Sky,

To give life to the sleeping earth,

Woven with the name 'water drops',

And sent as letters,

The whispers sky didn't unfold to the earth,

Are one by one with the drops,

One by one fall in a queue,

Split up on the earth.

artheartbreakinspirationalnature poetryperformance poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Esala Gunathilake

I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.

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  • Badhan Senabout a year ago

    So Fantastic Oh My God❤️Brilliant & Mind Blowing Your Story, Please Read My Stories and Subscribe Me

  • Tina D'Angeloabout a year ago

    Beautiful! You never know who rain is going to hit, as it hits everyone the same.

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    Excellent work, Esala! Very profound words!

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Nature is very inspiring and holds many messages. I love how you used raindrops.

  • Dame Cassabout a year ago

    It’s interesting how water holds messages. This is a great read thank you.

  • Susan Fourtané about a year ago

    Nature can be very inspiring.

  • Julie Robertsonabout a year ago

    Beautiful.

  • Dr. J.S. VIRKabout a year ago

    Amazing!

  • Jariatu Kallonabout a year ago

    I love your poems

  • Kevin MacELweeabout a year ago

    It's a very beautiful poem. Very enlightening. Great piece, keep up the good work peace

  • Solomon Walkerabout a year ago

    delightful poetry

  • Next Kodingabout a year ago

    it's a delicate and thoughtful meditation on how even the smallest elements in nature carry profound stories....

  • Dabasish Palabout a year ago

    super...

  • Persephoneabout a year ago

    That's beautiful! Congratulations on the text. I love rain.

  • Samabout a year ago

    Good work

  • Hanen Mehadbiabout a year ago

    This poem beautifully captures the dance between the sky and the earth through water drops. Keep it up!

  • LOVELY

  • Ashen Asmadalaabout a year ago

    Beautiful

  • Isla Griswaldabout a year ago

    Lovely, beautiful work!

  • Mohamed shaabout a year ago

    Super

  • JDwrites33about a year ago

    Expressing feeling.

  • Daniel Dulewskiabout a year ago

    Wonderfully written

  • Renabout a year ago

    Great

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I love that line where the drops split upon the earth.

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