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I wonder if?

I always used to ask for permission first.

By Thavien YliasterPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
I wonder if?
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I make poems in comments that are published to my page.

So far they make people happy, nobody's outraged.

I wonder if someone's secretly mad?

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If their mood's no longer glad

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Do they feel that they have been upstaged?

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Author's Notes: The poem's listed are by Heather Hubler and Loryne Andawey. I left poems in other people comments section such as Paul Stewart, KJ Aartila, Donna Renee, Gina C., and many more. If I stick around long enough I might just come across a poem or story of Yours and leave a poetic comment for it, inspired by it, or I might even turn it into a poetic story (yeah, I've done that before, check out Dharrsheena's "The Chronicles of Red.") Peace.

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Gina C.3 years ago

    I always love your poem comments!! 😍😍😍

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