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I Thought the Morning Sun was You, Lingering

by Bailey Watson

By Bailey JarvisPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Sun Rising Through Vapour (edited) by J.M.W. Turner

The doldrum fog of Lake Lanier had donned

September strength. The regal sun was dashing

Neath your wifely bedsheet veil, stripped

of rubied breastplate, freed of golden diadem.

You stared as you pleased, awhile you pleased

His hands and groggy lids with his own

Refracted glory; you reclined, pined upon

Ivory linens, spied him through the threads

And smiled. He kissed your brumous lips

And roused. You pulled apart, you to yours

And he to his. But with your lingering

Lingerie he draped across his brow, he saw

His tenants from the banister, ruling,

Looming without their knowing; he spied

If they might lift an insolent, ignorant eye,

That he might have the joy of smiting them.

Yes—your husband shrouded his face as Hal

The night-morn of Agincourt, as Ulysses

Within the guised Achaean underbelly.

As I gazed upon the copper coin—thinking

It was you, anodyn—my eyes did not curtsey.

And I fear that I am going to pay the price.

EkphrasticFree Versenature poetry

About the Creator

Bailey Jarvis

Just trying to obey the muses. They're holding my family hostage.

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  • Reid3 months ago

    I think it’s really admirable the way you’ve captured the intimacy of intimacy itself — how powerful and transcendent it feels in the moment, yet how fragile it becomes once we get dressed and step back into the world (at least, that’s my interpretation). You’ve expressed something both deeply sensual and quietly human. Great work with this piece — it lingers really beautifully.

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