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I Surrender

My hearts in your hands

By Asher FenixPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

To find you where,

The stairs do meet;

It is this secret,

That we must keep.

To wrap you up,

Hold you close to me;

My only love,

You’ll always be.

You set the bar,

No one can compare;

To let them try,

Would not be fair.

Your lips so soft,

The sweetest thing;

And on your hand,

I’ll place a ring.

You will be mine,

Forever more;

Like a bird in flight,

Our love will sore.

I won’t stop fighting,

I won’t give in;

To make you mine,

It’s what I’ll win.

When you watch me,

Your love surrounds;

And our lives together,

Will know no bounds.

And so these words,

You should always remember;

My heart to you,

I will always surrender.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Asher Fenix

I write under a nom de plume, for there are secrets the world shall never be ready to have revealed. So if it’s love, life, adventure, drama, suspense and mystery then come and enter my world and hear a tale never told before

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