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I Sing an Ode To You

My delicious sin

By Colleen Millsteed Published 2 years ago β€’ 2 min read
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You are there for me at every turn,

Every day,

You have my back,

In every way.

πŸ’•

When I’m feeling dirty,

You’re only too happy to please,

You meet my needs,

And do the job with ease.

πŸ’•

When I’m horribly cold,

You infuse me with your heat,

Smother me in warmth,

The pleasure is a treat.

πŸ’•

When I’m tired and lonely,

You infuse me with desire,

Wrap me in your cocoon,

A soothing pacifier.

πŸ’•

When I’m hurting,

And struggling to sleep,

You cuddle me in comfort,

And hold me while I weep.

πŸ’•

When I can’t get comfortable,

And need an alternative bed,

You never complain of the hours,

But patiently work with me instead.

πŸ’•

When I feel the need to relax,

Spend time with you to unwind,

You never disappoint,

No, you are always so very kind.

πŸ’•

I love the day to day relationship

We have built together,

From day one I gave you my heart,

And promised you forever.

πŸ’•

I battle to overcome the excitement,

Every time we plan to meet,

I hurry home at the drop of a hat,

Desperately searching for your heat.

πŸ’•

Then I wander into your room,

And gaze upon you in awe,

Laying quietly, waiting patiently,

Knowing it’s you I just adore.

πŸ’•

As I turn your knob to high,

I sigh with relief,

And climb on in, curl up tight,

As you wrap me in your sheaf.

πŸ’•

I couldn’t survive without you,

You’re such an intricate part of my day,

A necessity of high esteem,

What more can I say?

πŸ’•

I love when I slip within your heat,

Luxuriously melting in sheer glee,

Relaxing, pain free, warming,

Stimulating my pleasure reality.

πŸ’•

You’re my delicious sin,

Without you I’d be on the warpath,

As I sink into your depths,

I sing an ode to my fabulous bath.

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry β€” it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves β€” I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Oooo, such a lovely ode for a bath! It was so wonderful!

  • You had me soaking in your words from the very first, Colleen.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Wonderful job!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Colleen, this was marvelous!!! Superbly written!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Love it, I feel you on this one πŸ₯°

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