I love you! I love you! I love you!
Dedicated to M.K.
If all exquisite parts of you
That make you who you are
Were oceans deep across the world
I’d learn to swim that far
~~~
If every laugh and every smile
Vanished to thin air
Its magic I would seek to find
To summon all we’ve shared
~~~
If seriousness and sorrow
Were scattered in the stars
I’d transcend space to get ours back
Complete, this love of ours
~~~
I love you! I love you! I love you!
Passion and thirst consume
I love you! I love you! I love you!
My life you have exhumed
~~~
Harmoniously connected
Your words my soul’s new song
We share its rhythm near and far
Finally, I belong
~~~
Your sweet embrace is home for me
Its warmth is safe and kind
A kismet jigsaw puzzle piece
While we are intertwined
~~~
Through infinite infinities
Your eyes meet mine each time
Human, duck, or seahorse I know
Forever you’ll be mine
~~~
I love you! I love you! I love you!
My gem of rare romance
I love you! I love you! I love you!
My endless happy dance
About the Creator
Kaneene Pineda
My mind is full of thrilling stories intertwined with details about my life. Blending them into fiction is my passion. I long to be part of a writing community. I'm here to build that.
@kaneene_kreative_writing
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Keep reading
More stories from Kaneene Pineda and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (1)
Wow, what a powerful opening, linking the parts that makes them who they are to the ocean and promising to swim that far, to explain the lengths in which you would go. What a show of true genuine love. My gosh, as I read to the end I realise your repetition of I love you I love you. I could feel the love, not just because of the words I love you, but because of where they come in. I love the rhythm in the words around your repetition, it brings this song alive and make goosebumps on my arms. How original are your words, they capture so much of what love is all about, in such a unique and pure way. I can't escape it's grasp and how it makes me imagine myself being in love. This was amazing Kaneene, and I am so glad I found this. You've got a new subscriber 👌👏🤗