This House I Built: Part Two
Part Two
"FINDING HOME"
Sunlight spilling across my skin,
a warm hush; the world pulling me in.
A clean swept sky, breathless and wide –
doors yield open.
Crowns remain untied.
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One smile – my silk-spun raptor.
They never glimpse what’s curled. Fractured.
No game for waiting. The world – still baiting.
My love spun fine,
A waltz turned brine.
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Spring splits soft, rose petals bruised.
A bride dressed in borrowed hues.
The dungeon laced in ivory grace.
A hush creeps near.
Stay still, my dear.
"Uncontrollable"
Emerald eyes –
mirrors that lie.
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Curtains drawn,
Spark. Stage shorn.
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Love – thick ash,
flames bright and thrash.
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You fell from grace,
the path erased.
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Uncontrollable.
Slick of black. Frostbite fable.
"DARK MIRROR"
You didn’t scream.
You didn’t beg.
No torch to the curtains,
no blaze on velvet floors.
You vanished –
no swinging doors.
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Dark halls echo louder than thunder.
Fury ricochets – shards in the air.
You left me. Out there you wander.
Whip. Crack. Splintering hail…
Just me. Still reaching
strings battered. Breached.
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You were my finest puppet.
A masterpiece of shame.
I choreographed the silence, threaded your spine with my name.
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But nature. - the thief,
a vine-blooded curse,
cracking the walls, splitting the seams.
Loose hinges and looms.
Your absence dripped downward,
soaking the beams like wounds.
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I was god.
Now walls rot.
My performance stage crumbles.
Dust shrouds our wedding frame.
wind gnaws the eaves
when it dares speak your name.
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The strings, once levers, now lace my fists.
No one dangles.
No one left to dance
About the Creator
Kaneene Pineda
My mind is full of thrilling stories intertwined with details about my life. Blending them into fiction is my passion. I long to be part of a writing community. I'm here to build that.
@kaneene_kreative_writing



Comments (7)
Congrats on TS!
All of the poems were great! congrats on your top story!
Great work
Best of luck!! 💔🥰🌺❤️🌹
Awesome!!!
Don't think too much. As long as you can eat well, sleep well and stay healthy, just live well
All three are perfect!