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I had to use all five with you

Take off your seat belt

By JNSQPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

It doesn’t make sense. I used all 5 with you and I’m not sure if that’s ok. All 5 senses to make sense of what was happening in this moment of ecstasy. I could taste, touch, smell, hear, and see you in every one of my visions. Can you believe I tasted dark chocolate when I swallowed you? I used two hands to hold it until I could take it back to my tonsils. Aye Jill S. not the first one to do it right. I don’t half ass my craft so I take my time to pay attention to how you readjust yourself to enjoy it. You’ve had a long week and you’ve been simply waiting for the moment to do nothing! But lay there and be pleased. As I’m on my knees not ashamed to put my hair in a bun and spit out my gum because its show time. I can hear you. As I pulled back up off of it I could damn near feel your heart beat on the back of my tongue oh this is serious. One things for sure is that I aim to get an A+ because it’s not worth the effort if I’m not into it I get pleasure too. I’m become intoxicated at the fact I can make you breathe like that, make your head and your eyes roll back, now grab my head from the back. I don’t find it disrespectful…..this is the time to feel free to do what needs to be done to get the job done properly so there’s no stopping me. I wanna cough, choke and spit all of the necessary tools to get you to that point…it’s expected. I don’t want you to cum on my ass or on my back but in its rightful place. I wanna taste your anticipation, the ideas of being inside of me and on top of me, and I wanna moan as you cum with me. Careful not to waste one drop so it’s necessary that I use all 5 senses.

slam poetry

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