I hear you in the quiet spaces,
Where your thoughts find their OWN place,
In the moments when you SOAR,
Beyond the words that fall to the floor.
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Your parents, steady like the ground,
With quiet strength, they stand their ground,
But you, a SPARK in the evening breeze,
Wild and free, like rustling leaves.
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I hear you in the laugh you keep,
The secrets hidden in dreams you SEEK,
The trail you BLAZE with every step,
Even when the world has not kept.
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You are a star with a different shine,
Not bound to paths they've LEFT behind.
You WANDER, you WONDER, you EXPLORE,
In places they've never thought to soar.
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I hear you,
In the pain that you won’t SHOW,
Keep searching, keep yearning—
It’s your HEART, your SOUL, your GLOW.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (21)
To be heard is to be loved! This is so lovely, God bless and keep your heart
Nice rhyme 😊. My favourite verse is: “You are a star with a different shine, Not bound to paths they've LEFT behind. You WANDER, you WONDER, you EXPLORE, In places they've never thought to soar.”✅
Woahh, so lovely!
Woah Komal, the last lines were beautiful! Incredible poem! 💓🌟
Oh my, soooo many beautiful lines, I can't choose just one! Loved this so much!
Felt this one...
These words are stunning. I feel the rhythm of the inspiration! 😊✨☀️So so powerful and what a rush of joy I feel when I read this.
Absolutely breath taking Komal!!! I adore this piece, this is probably my favourite poem of yours to date, my favourite story is still the haunted toilet lol
Beautiful work KoKo! 💖✨
Such a beautiful, encouraging piece. Well done.
Oh, this is such a warm and friendly piece. You've penned a wonderful poem <3
I love this! It’s such a nice mix of encouragement and self-discovery. The way you talk about being different and finding your own path feels really relatable. Plus, the flow makes it easy to read and enjoy. Great work!
i hear u
That line about “a star with a different shine”? Perfection. This whole piece feels like a warm hug and a push forward all at once. Truly inspiring!
Beautiful! I really loved the images of the 2nd and 4th stanzas
This is so warm and effervescent! An amazing tone Komal. You are an excellent poet. 😊
A true poem of an empath. This shows what a compassionate person you are! May you find the true love you deserve!
"You are a star with a different shine," ....OH, I love that so much, Komal 🥹
Beautiful poet
SO SO Nice!
This poetry is so lovely. I hear you I hear you how beautiful 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋♦️⭐️