I turned TWENTY, what a day,
A milestone graced in every way.
The years FLEW by like fleeting streams,
Yet each one shines with cherished dreams.
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To God, I’m grateful, deeply true,
For blessings vast, for LIFE anew.
A miracle, they said, I’d not survive—
Yet here I stand, ALIVE, ALIVE...
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Doctors spoke of TIME so brief,
An hour more could bring only grief.
A body drained, yet I held TIGHT,
And somehow fought to see the light.
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If not for mercy, love DIVINE,
This life could never have been mine.
But here I stand, a TALE to share,
Of hope that lingers in the air.
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I feel the ache of fleeting years,
But joy dissolves my hidden TEARS.
Among kind souls, I’ve found my place,
Wrapped in LOVE’s eternal embrace.
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So here’s to TWENTY, life’s sweet store,
And dreams that stretch to 120 more.
For I’m a MIRACLE, bathed in light,
A testament to God’s great might.
Happy twenty, full of cheer,
May this be my finest year!
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (34)
Gosh, you show a lot of maturity for your young age!! Happy belated birthday, my friend!
Happy belated, hope all was as you wished. Be blessed.
A very happy belated birthday wish, Komal. I am having severe difficulty, however, with wrapping my head around the fact you are a mere twenty years old, because your writing bespeaks of a growth and maturity so far beyond your years. I hope the miraculous nature of your years renews for many more.
Congrats,Komal🎉🎉🎊👌👌
Yayy! Congratulations, Komal ❤✨🎉🎊 God bless you!
Yay Komal!! Congrats on honourable mention this week!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
🍻 cheers to 20! You're talented beyond your years! What's next?
Happy belated Birthday 🌺🌹❤️
Happy birthday! Many more to come….
Happy 20th Birthday, Komal! 🎉 Your words are nothing short of miraculous, just like you. Your strength, resilience, and unwavering spirit are a beautiful testament to the power of love and faith. May this year bring you even more blessings, joy, and the fulfillment of every dream you dare to chase. You are truly a light in this world, and I'm so grateful to know you. Here's to the next 120 years of happiness, health, and endless love! 💖🎂
You have wisdom beyond your years! Happy Birthday !
I love this Komal, so cheerful and bright!! Happy Birthday!!
Happy birthday spring chicken
A moving story in rhyme. Bravo.
Hey Komal Happy Birthday 🎈....May you be successful in life.
Indeed this is gonna be your finest yearr!! Love your rhymes💗
Happy birthday star girl!! May you stay in good health always! The world needs your beautiful light! 2 decades of being absolutely iconic!!😊cheers to a thousand moree🥂🥂💗
Happy Birthday to a very sweet young lady! May all your wishes come true today!
Oh wow, I’m amazed how much beauty shines through your soul from the words you write! Happiest of birthdays to you! 🎉✨😊
Gorgeously-written koko! May #20 be divine! May God give you the desires of your heart and may you continue to flourish and be blessed my friend! 💖💕
How beautiful. Happy birthday.
Aw, Happy Birthday to you, Komal ☺️💙 What a powerful and hopeful poem!
Awww, these gifts are awesome! Happyyyyy Birthday to you gorgeous girl! 🎉
Happy birthday very good work