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Hot Shower

Haiku

By Rowan Finley Published 2 years ago 1 min read

Steamy shower air

Wild candle flame dances fast

To sweet rhythm and song

inspirationalGratitude

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal8 months ago

    I can already hear the music and feel the warmth. Total mood.✨

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    This was very hot and steamy. I need to shower after it. I also am now subscribed. Brenton led me here with his...bathroom haikus lol.

  • Oooo, very hot and steamy! Well done!

  • Bren2 years ago

    I wish; this is me: the cold tap is fucked manky bathroom looks like shit ceiling fan spiders

  • Colleen Walters2 years ago

    Pretty steamy and sensual 🙃great job!

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