Holy Palmers’ Kiss
Winter warmth haiku
An icicle, I am;
Until you set me ablaze—
The gift of your touch
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Sandor Szabo
I’m looking to find a home for wayward words. I write a little bit of everything from the strange, to the moody, to a little bit haunted. If my work speaks to you, drop me a comment or visit my Linktree
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Comments (6)
Nice one ❤️
Love how tender this is
💖This poem shows just how important it is to share ourselves with others. I feel most of us are icicles at first. I could see the icicles so vividly, but I could also see the emotions on the face when the inside feels cold.
That contrast between ice and fire is beautiful 🔥❄️
Awww, so lovely! Such a beautiful Haiku!
Oh this is great! Poetic but to the point. And that middle line is exceptional. Well done!