Left Knife on my heart
He forgot; his Dementia
Took my life, my loss!
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Dear You, Thank you from my heart for spending your precious time reading my words.
For You: "You're incredible! Never let the doubts of others dim your light. You are one of a kind, and your aura shines brighter than anyone’s."
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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It's your smile
Expression of warmth Something you hide as it's debt Your mirth; it's your smile! . . Thank you for reading it. I guess the thrill of Haiku poems is that you can draw many different reflections from a few words. It can always be seen from many different perspectives. It's time to share your thoughts!
By Maryam Batoolabout a year ago in Poets
Let's Don't Do This
"I just can't do this anymore..." "Do what?" What can't you do? Put gas in your own car? I swear to God you make me take care of everything, don't you? You know I'm on my way to work right now but that never stops you from bothering me, does it?"
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Wow! Girl congratulations dear on winning 3rd place for Best Emerging Creator 🤗🎉🎉. I'm very happy for you 😊
Congratulations on placing third for Best Emerging Creator on this week's leaderboard with this piece. Well done.
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A heartache where memory fades, leaving a sharp, silent pain. The person you knew is gone, even while they remain. I don’t even know what I wrote! Haha 😂😂 But you write with such depth, it’s an amazing art. My sister, don’t go too deep, or one day you might drown, it’s dangerous.😃😃😃 Honestly, this is very impactful.✨
Wow, such a touching haiku. Thanks for the word of encouragement at the end ♥︎✨