Hinokami

Four elements haiku one

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read

Image: detail from a public domain photograph by John McColgan

Dancing destruction ~

Breath of life where no life lives ~

Choking smut exhale.

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Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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