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Her Own Worst Enemy

Though few would understand

By Colleen Millsteed Published 4 years ago 1 min read
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She is all grown up now

But then has she really,

Or has she just forgotten

Deliberately or freely?

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I see her inner children

When she was a little girl,

Her false smile, even then

Shyly hiding behind her curls.

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Her eyes as big as her heart

Her love sheltered inside,

Her tears buried so deeply

Her pain something to hide.

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She had grandeur dreams

Happiness her only goal,

Until every dream shattered

And buried in her old soul.

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The years passed slowly

But I see her sweet teen,

She’s quieter, sadder, wiser

Knowing never to be seen.

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She grew into her darkness

Where nothing was the same,

She took up training dragons

Learning to breathe flames.

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Once she reach adulthood

She understood the outcasts,

As they made the best friends

Not judging her for her past.

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They were the only ones to know

How it felt totally out of control,

They understood the heartache

Borne of a self destructive soul!

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Mariann Carroll4 years ago

    Bravo 👏

  • Jason Hauser4 years ago

    Good job! The only suggestion I might make is a couple places where if you remove the "s" the rhyme works better, like "same" and "flames" or "girl" and "curls". A small edit.

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