Heavenly Bodies
A SenryΕ« (ε·ζ³) For The Vocal Sky-Ku Challenge
By Mike Singleton π Mikeydred Published about a year ago β’ 1 min read
An AI Creation By The Author
Introduction
I promise this is my final entry.
A SenryΕ« (ε·ζ³) For The Vocal Sky-Ku Challenge
The music is "Bright Phoebus" by Lal and Mike Waterson
Heavenly Bodies
πππππ
Bright Phoebus Shining
Selene Silver, Twinkling Stars
Heavenly Bodies
πππππ
About the Creator
Mike Singleton π Mikeydred
A Weaver of Tales and Poetry
Join & Share In VSS
Creationati
Call Me Les β₯ Gina β₯ Heather β₯ Caroline β₯
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
View more
Add your insightsExcellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Keep reading
More stories from Mike Singleton π Mikeydred and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (10)
Beautiful poem. I find writing Sky-ku very addicting lol.
such a lovely piece, you just one of the best writers
Great choice of words.
Beautiful words, Mike!
Beautifully written.
This is a nice way to say good night as the night sky twinkles. Good work.
Nice. Although the use of 'twinkling' reminded me of a debate about how accents can play a role in this type of poetry. I'd read it as three syllables (twin-kul-ing), but a different accent would have it as two (twin-kling). I wonder if Japanese runs into similar issues?
Beautiful!
This was sooooo wonderful Mike. I'm working on my Haiku. Advance apologies if it's a Senryu π
This is so magical! Well done! :)