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Heaven's drape drawn closed
Through twinkling windows, you're there
Swinging on the moon
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (154)
Cathy this fills me with inspiration. Haiku - I have never written. But I will try now. So very much ‘imparted within the ‘boundaries of the sacred.’ Top Story and first place! Most deserved. Pauline 🌸
Though somewhat belated well done for a moving haiku and congratulations on you Top win. Where does the time go?
This is so beautiful…
Congratulations, Cathy
FIRSTLY CONGRATULATION ON THE TOP STORY AND ITS AMAZING
Congratulations, Cathy!!!!!
Somehow I missed this and I am so glad I found it!
Not sure how I missed this one, it's amazing!
Well done! Keep pushing forward with your excellent work—congrats!
Congratulations on top story and first place🎉🎉🎉🌹🌹🌹
Congrats on your placement Cathy! Best wishes!! ☺️
Wow Cathy!!! This is so awesome. You won TWICE with this lovely poem. That is such an accomplishment! Congrats!! 🎊
Absolutely amazing haiku, Cathy! No wonder it is a multi-layer winner! Congratulations!
Congratulations Cathy! This one was my favourite!!!
Yay, buddy! What a champ. Congrats for placing with this wonderful piece. Congrats congrats congrats!
Absolutely beautiful!
Insightful and versatile ... "Heaven's Curtain" can carry different meanings for many people during various times throughout their lives. Congratulations, Cathy!❤️
This piece is pure magic! I am SO EXCITED for you, my friend! Wow! I read this at least a billion times. Totally captivated by the imagery of it. Great work, Cathy! So elated for you!
Congratulations! Keep up the great work!"❤💖👍
So happy you placed this gorgeous piece for the vocal awards! Congratulations
Love it! So glad you got appreciated!
Yahhh! Congratulations 🎉🎈🏆❤️
Still enchanted. Congratulations, Cathy!
Congratulations, Cathy
Ahhhhh!!!! I'm soooooo excited!!!! You freaking wonnnnn this!!!! Congratulations!!!!