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"External beauty only goes so far
I'm more concerned with who you actually are--
Way deep inside!
Come out now, Clyde,
there's no need to hide!
*
She cuts right into her wide-eyed guy--
He stammers and cries:
You lied!
...
Caress of his myocardium is her heart felt reply
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Sam Spinelli
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Comments (5)
Is this as sinister as I think it is? Hair raising last line man. Great job!
Oh yes, it's what's inside that really matters 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved this!
Really clever take on the challenge, good luck 😁
I really don't know what to think of this poem. Nicely Written however.
✍️♦️✍️💙💙💙💙