My Darling,
I'm afraid I'll have to be brief.
Recently, a Vocal contest was released
A poetic opportunity
To profess my feelings towards thee
But there's a limit, you see
Fifty words, exactly
To say what I need.
So without any further ado,
Allow me to say how much I--
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Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts6 days ago in Longevity
Comments (4)
Oops, word limit reached hahahahaha. Loved this!
Beautiful and very thought out. Love this.
you have done a spectacular job in this piece. Its so beautiful yet clever. very nice. I loved it.
Aww, this is so sweet and clever! You’ve packed so much love into just fifty words—impressive and heartwarming. Your darling is lucky to have such poetic affection!