Haunted never after
RM Stockton's Haunted Christmas prompt--Elf on the shelf.

A lovely elf sat majestically upon my shelf
Elegant, ebony black in her porcelain dignified grace
She emanated stateliness and grandeur
While oozing a certain 'je ne sais quoi'
Oh, she was so 'I don't know what'.......
Even though she came only in my dreams
To haunt me with the heavenly nectar of the Gods
Which, were I ever tempted to so partake
Would render me instantly dead!
Some nights she assumed another devilish form

A long lost friend, she too, long dead
Bidding me come and play, like we once did in childhood
Ever so long ago
"Drink, drink and join me in the afterlife. It is such fun there"!
Then came the devil himself to taunt and haunt me
Offering the sinful apple of the Garden of Eden
And gifts of ever after and forever sounding so sublime
This likeness of Rumpelstiltskin faded now to Black

While in my dreams I tossed and turned
Wishing these ghosts of Christmas past
Would just let me slumber and sleep in peace.
And a child shall lead them, it is said

This child he smiles, but evil distastefully glares from the eyes
Never, never shall this child ever can beguile and charm
He is an evil elf resting atop my unhappy dream shelf.
Who else comes this night to infest my dreams?

Ah, the temptress
She is back...unhappily realizing
I drank the cursed God given nectar
I am dead....now my friend and I
Can live happily Never after!!!!!!!
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Novel Allen
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Comments (15)
Very dark tone but gotta love it :)
I loved the dark tone you created and the photos were amazing!!!
This was very naughty but very nice!!! What a crazy dream/ romp.. loved it Novel! π
Very Creative! Well done!
I have to admit, Novel, with an elf that hot (1st & last pictures) it would be extremely difficult not to drink the nectar, lol.
Brilliant take and the pictures complimented the narrative perfectly! Very dark macabre, loved it!
Awesome poem and the artwork of the ebony elf is so beautiful! Well done.
You are amazing Allen.
Loved this!
Wonderful. I love dark poetry, and this piece is hauntingly sublime! The words flowed like silk, and the story was perfect. Well done, Novel!
Oh crikey. I'm getting poe and dickens here!
love the darkness
Oooo, this was so dark and hauntingly beautiful! Loved it so much!
Excellent dark poem !!!ππ½ππ½ππ½ππ½
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