As another ring materialises
on my trunk,
a gentle reminder to be
kind to myself
helps me stay anchored.
Life can be tough.
Sometimes even the humble things
can hollow you out.
I take nourishment
from the simple pleasures:
a movie night.
a sip of gin.
A tree can only be as strong
as the forest that surrounds it.
Hands in the dirt,
I nurture my family,
my pillars of strength,
and keep our jungle green.
The challenges we face
only make our roots grow deeper.
While my gnarled branches
reach toward the sun,
I know I have my
little family
by my side.
About the Creator
Sandy Gillman
I’m a mum to a toddler, just trying to get through the day. I like to write about the ups and downs of parenting. I’m not afraid to tell it like it is. I hope you’ll find something here to laugh, relate to, and maybe even learn from.
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Moving, spiritually nourishing, with a clear and beautiful message about love, connection with nature, and creativity.
Cool analogy you built here. Lovely poem! 💚
Lovely imagery & inspirational regarding the importance of family.
Awww very beautiful poem. Such a healing activity to dewell in nature.
Gorgeous imagery ❤️
Well-wrought! Trees thrive where they are firmly rooted.
I love how you personify a tree as a mother! Beautiful piece! 💚
I resonate so much with this line, 'sometimes the humble things can hollow you out' Love how you butter the wisdom on this toasted poem of self love and wellbeing. Only make our root grow deeper. Love the point made here 👌🏾 Such a sweet ending too. 🤗❤️🖤👏🏾
Nature is healing too! Thank you!💕💗
Gorgeous and inspiring! Go Sandy! 💪🏾🎉
I love this part:"Sometimes even the humble things can hollow you out." So true, when we overstretch ourselves and forget to water our roots, anything can feel taxing. I love how you used the metaphor of a tree for this!
Aaha, short and sweet, the most essential "Hands in the dirt".
Our family does remind us our priority. Stay happy !
I love trees and this is a great celebration
Gorgeous imagery and gorgeous poem mate! Such a warm piece of writing!
This was so lovely and beautifully written!
This poem feels like a deep breath after a long day. I love how comforting and real your words are.
Sweet and very motivating lines sandy. Great stuff @Sandy Gillman
Very sweet I love your writing I relate so much as a mom