Halal series 2.0
If you're not Muslim, you still can read this ...
Islam is my religion and I love it the most
I'll never abandon it, not at any cost
Being a Muslim girl, I eat dates not the– toast
Unsolved puzzle of life, will ultimately get you lost
Your pride is nothing man, don't know who are you!
You got back what you threw, do you get DEJA VU?
You're a human, you do faults, your worth is less than shoe
You're equal in His eyes, no one's old or new!
Can't understand? What you did wrong since you were born?
Wait until one day, the day when you hear the horn
No worries if you did good, You'll get your fruits and corn
Don't regret it later, every time when he made you warn
Author's note ;
Just a few different aspects of my religion <3
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (3)
wow! Girliiii ;) you just nailed it, being a Muslim I felt the most blessed person in this world Alhumdullilah :) Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem. It beautifully expresses your deep love for Islam and the values it brings to your life. Your perspective on faith, humility, and the importance of choices is inspiring. Keep writing and sharing your voice!
This was so beautifully written! Loved your poem!
Your words present a deep blend of personal beliefs, identity, and philosophical contemplation, which is wonderful. This poem reflects on the complexities of life, pride, and the principle of karma (‘what you threw away came back to you’), perhaps viewing human mistakes and the significance of life from a broader perspective, indicating that in God's eyes, all are equal. The final lines hint at the day in the future when one will receive the fruits of their actions, presenting the idea of justice and consequences as per Islamic teachings. The mention of fruits and Mecca symbolizes paradise, and the reference to the horn could signify the Day of Judgment. Although I haven’t read much about Islam, ‘if I made any mistake, please forgive me, sister.’ I respect all religions, and the essence of all faiths is love, compassion, and equality. If God exists somewhere, He loves all the beings on Earth. 👏👍✨💥