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Grenade-bottle candle

a love poem

By Beth SarahPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read

when October seeps in at the fringes there is no remorse for it

for it was in the shadowy haze of the kitchen where their love was forged

and the long nights of winter hold a kind of mysticism; evoking

strings of blue wax dripping slowly down the curves of their grenade-bottle

and solidifying,

layer upon layer upon layer. And of

wide, attentive, cautious eyes and secrets told and

dreams born and

heady, shy kisses;

of untold adoration; a crackling current of

promise and infinite possibility;

of a poignant reticence with the intoxicating

sense that if she were to succumb,

it would be

everything.

She was right. -

Laid in those nights, the foundations of a

monolith:

intimidating, imposing and impossibly beautiful

love poems

About the Creator

Beth Sarah

We've been scribbled in the margins of a story that is patently absurd

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  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Oh, this is so powerful and beautifully done!

  • Paul Stewart12 months ago

    oh wow Beth, this has such strongly evocative language! from a writer/reader pov, this was a verbose delight! from a warm bloodied pov this was a fullon wax melter of passion!

  • Whoaaaa, this was so beautifully penned! Loved your poem!

  • Euan Brennan12 months ago

    Wow, this is incredible. Very powerful! Gripped me from the first sentence.

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