Grenade-bottle candle
a love poem

when October seeps in at the fringes there is no remorse for it
for it was in the shadowy haze of the kitchen where their love was forged
and the long nights of winter hold a kind of mysticism; evoking
strings of blue wax dripping slowly down the curves of their grenade-bottle
and solidifying,
layer upon layer upon layer. And of
wide, attentive, cautious eyes and secrets told and
dreams born and
heady, shy kisses;
of untold adoration; a crackling current of
promise and infinite possibility;
of a poignant reticence with the intoxicating
sense that if she were to succumb,
it would be
everything.
She was right. -
Laid in those nights, the foundations of a
monolith:
intimidating, imposing and impossibly beautiful
About the Creator
Beth Sarah
We've been scribbled in the margins of a story that is patently absurd

Comments (4)
Oh, this is so powerful and beautifully done!
oh wow Beth, this has such strongly evocative language! from a writer/reader pov, this was a verbose delight! from a warm bloodied pov this was a fullon wax melter of passion!
Whoaaaa, this was so beautifully penned! Loved your poem!
Wow, this is incredible. Very powerful! Gripped me from the first sentence.