'Gainst the Foggy Windowpanes
I watch the raindrops spatter
'Gainst the foggy windowpanes
I watch the raindrops spatter
'Gainst the foggy windowpanes
*
On the roof, gentle patter
Pondering my heart's desires
I watch the raindrops spatter
*
Trying to quell love's fires
Wanting only for your love
Pondering my heart's desires
*
Darkened clouds around, above
I cling to a hope, a dream
Wanting only for your love
*
But at last, I see a gleam
In your eyes, mirrored in mine
I cling to a hope, a dream
*
This is more than just a sign
'Gainst the foggy windowpanes
In your eyes, mirrored in mine
'Gainst the foggy windowpanes
*
A note on form: The Terzanelle is a poetry type which is a combination of the villanelle and the terza rima forms. Learn more about the Terzanelle at Shadow Poetry.
About the Creator
Krysha Thayer
Welcome to my little corner of Vocal! I've been a copywriter for many years after earning my BA in English and Creative Writing. I'm now back to the fun stuff, enjoing short fiction and poetry. You can find me on Facebook!
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Comments (6)
I love how it ends up with hope at the end.
The 1960's song Rhythm of the Falling Rain came into my mind. The repetition gives the poem a poignant effect, Khrysha.
Gorgeous work Krysha! 🌸
Whoaaaa, this is such a complex form and you managed to execute it so brilliantly! Loved your poem!
I found this so cozy and comforting, just like being tucked inside on a rainy day. 🌧️
This is great. I'm not familiar with the form you've used. I'll have to check it out. The repetition perfectly compliments the subject you chose. It might seem silly but I love 'Gainst instead of against. Perhaps it's a cultural difference, but it would simply never occur to me to do that! ⚡💙 Bill⚡