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Frosted Slumber

For the Frosted Verse Challenge

By Cindy CalderPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Departure, VanDusen Botanical Gardens, Vancouver (Photo via u/shawneffel)

A crisp chill creeps forth in winter’s frosty first

Stealing in like a thief one early December dawn

Falling on two lovers sleeping thus entwined.

In the icy veil of morning's dew, two chilled pawns

Find warmth in the other’s slumbering arms,

Much like innocence found in a newborn fawn.

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Unaware and coiled, they sleep as lovers always do

Dreaming desires spun of adoration and frost’s dew.

Within a fine web of light, two souls shine as one

Much like residual effects of wind and rain anew,

Or the spinning sun and earth’s revolving dances

To leave love blooming like flowers they did strew.

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Lovers blended thus in dreams on a frosty, chilly day

Speak of trust, a single voice of unity seeking to invade

Youth’s light of love, immortalized in depths of nature,

A frozen flower lingering in the ice of winter’s shade;

Shining silently amidst the dawn of new day’s birth,

The full price of love and fate’s joining is well weighed.

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About the Creator

Cindy Calder

From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Oooh "as lovers always do" this time 😁

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Your evocative words paired well with the poignant sculpture to create something magical! loved it, Cindy!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Beautiful.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Stunning work, Cindy! Love how well it paired with the sculpture in the photo!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    All I can say is just beautifully done.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    This is very beautifully written! Gorgeous✨

  • Poppy about a year ago

    This is so so gorgeous. 'Dreaming desires spun of adoration and frost’s dew' was an especially beautiful line!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful work, Cindy. Well done.

  • Awww, this was so sweet and lovely! Such a wonderful poem!

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Perfect take on "their" cold and wintry story.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    This poem is so beautiful and poignant, Cindy! And I love the sculpture!

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