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From the Beach

I declare my love

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

This city life has gotten me down

It’s time for me to get away from it all

This time tomorrow, you'll know where I’ll be

On a beach somewhere surrounded by sandcastles

Soaking up the sun and listening to the wind chimes

Sounding like a siren calling me to shore

I’ll be sitting and reading to my heart's content

I’ll send you a postcard that you’ll keep

That tells you how much I love you

Forever and always

My heart belongs to you even after the grave

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Wow!! First of all, awesome AI art! Second of all, this is gorgeous and wholesome with a shocking and heartbreaking end! Really well done!

  • Awww, this was so wonderful! Loved your take on this challenge!

  • oh, my heart feels this one!

  • Collecting postcards is one of my favourite hobbies. Your poetry leads my mind to wander to a tranquil, soulful place. 🌹 Lovely.

  • What an idyllic scene! Delightful ❤️

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    There's a wistful sadness here.

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    That’s a picture you made me imagine, I was on the Beach. Excellent work 👌🏽

  • A wistful venture forward into paradise, though with eyes still misty.

  • Amazing work! And thanks for turning me on to another unofficial challenge!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Wonderful job!

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