Freedom of Expression
Expressing or Oppressing?
Waves of rationality and sanity overtake my aspirations to be Free
Willing to swim past the known edges but
The Great Wall of reality fills my vision.
I can’t see past the brittle bricks held together by fallacies.
Bricks of mortar and conniving mortals dousing fires and stepping on budding seeds
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They won’t allow us to breathe
they won’t allow us to seek or look around for new beats unless it matches their drums.
Constant rhythmic patterns of old.
Every step and every move locked to the track, lest we derail from the created path with loose feet.
It’s just an Imitation Game, following set moulds to attain false immortality
for fear of irrelevance.
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The Dark Knights of modern ideologies wander the surface with pitches and forks
Rallying against the oppressive current
Powering against the flow of sameness
Staring at the bleak greyness of options no different than the last
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Does new mean better,
or is it simply the old made clever?
Is life just a cyclical endeavour?
Am I a trailblazer or the oppressor?
Will my ideals be toppled by a zephyr?
Questions roaming forever
Subjective ideals aren’t meant to pressure the masses, I know
but what if it is the truth?
What if it is undeniable and resolute?
Do I have a duty to reveal and execute my will upon others?
I don’t know...
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Author's Note: I thought it was an interesting topic to think about so I tried to get into the mind of both sides of the spectrum and created this little poem. I sprinkled a few random things in the first three stanzas because I was bored (kind of fitting of the topic of the poem).
About the Creator
Mo Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.
Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun
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Comments (15)
Insightful!!!❤️❤️💕
"It’s just an Imitation Game, following set moulds to attain false immortality / for fear of irrelevance. " Ooof, Mohammed. This hit deep. Beautifully put.
Interesting
they won’t allow us to seek or look around for new beats unless it matches their drums.*
Does new mean better / old made clever.. I smiled widely at this. It’s very often the truth, isn’t it? So many gems in this one, another really enjoyable read 🙏🏻🤍
Love the rhythm and the concept of this poem.
A unique flow of words that kept me off-kilter while reading, so it worked well with your content focus. Different AND interesting. I cannot express enough what an important topic this is and how relevant for right now. Congrats on the top story!
I love how well this flowed!! Congratulations on top story!!
Interesting concept!
Well said! I especially like "Does new mean better, or is it simply the old made clever?" Congrats on the TS. Well deserved.
Congrats 🎈🎉🍾🎊 on top story
Well done, sir! Glad to see this get Top Story! Congrats!
love the thought provoking words-welcome back
This packs a cerebral punch! loved the random bits as my mind wanders a lot! great piece, Mohammed
Love this , nice work