Firstly feeling famished
Finally
Frenzied feeding finished
Feeling
Floating flotsam fizzing
Freed
Funky fiery filling
For
Flatulent freeing
Farting.
About the Creator
Gerald Holmes
Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.
R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.
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Comments (13)
This was such a comedic Tautogram, I love the direction you went with this!! Very funny! 😊
Bahahahah hilarious 😁🤣🤣
Lol, awesome and hilarious!
Love this, and that ending 😅😅😅
Comedic way of presenting this, I like the layout. Well done
🤣🤣🤣🤣
Okay Gerald you made me laugh with that last word. Great job as always!!!
I didn't expect the ending at all lol. Nice one!
Fun, funny, fantatic!!!
Superb job ❤️‼️
Who knew Flatulence could be so entertaining?
hahaha. This was great. Love how you highlighted that all-important phrase. Well done.
LOL! Clever and what a relief by the end...hahaha!! This was Fabulous :)