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Flight

For the Sensational challenge

By L.C. SchäferPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Flight
Photo by Linus Belanger on Unsplash

I am height

rush and roar

updrafts, carrying me higher

I am lightness

a soft warm heartbeat in a wide, cold sky

ruffle of feathers

I am cold

smell of wind

fresh tang of it

green falling away

everything smaller

life glint, sharp beady flint

I am joy

dip and swoop

fluttering scribble against the vast blue

I am free

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As always - thank you for reading! I appreciate feedback. Please leave a comment so I can reciprocate.

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If you are interested - I spent the weekend with family and there was a particular crow circling the garden. He was huge! I enjoyed watching his flight. I hope you enjoy it as well.

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 3 years ago

    Lovely words and a great poem

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    I can feel it

  • This was so liberating! Beautiful poem!

  • Oh, the crow that inspired a poem! I really enjoyed this, beautiful imagery.

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    That seems about as right s us groundlings will ever get it. Well done, L.C.!🦅

  • Andrei Z.3 years ago

    For some reason, this made me recall Poe's story about a guy who flew off to the moon on an air balloon filled with a gas that is 30-something lighter than hydrogen. Haha, and before that, he killed his creditors.

  • Kelley Zherzhi3 years ago

    I love your use of all five senses. Flying is always fascinating to those who can’t achieve it ♥️♥️

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