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Fledgling

Senryu disguised as haiku.. 😉

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

Sheltered, protected

Kept safe in nest of their love

Fed from their own mouths

……

Raised with tender care

Yet tempered with consequence

Fledgling unspoiled

…..

Taught not only flight

But also the love thereof

Now ready to soar

…..

Then, nest left behind

Certainly not forgotten

Their lessons well learned

…..

Venture into world

Seek out my own correct path

Build nest of my own

…..

High up in a tree

With mate and my own fledglings

Lessons to pass on

inspirational

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    Awww, this was so wonderful, King Andrew!

  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    So beautiful ♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Inspirational haiku/senryu!!! ❤️❤️💕

  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    Such a beautiful haiku/senryu and the pictures are lovely

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