My life on a slide
Smeared on electronic glass
Big Brother watches
The basic idea for this senryu came from dialog in Paul Stewart - Iconoclast review of Frank Ferdinand latest album. Check it out at the link below and give a listen to a track or three on his Spotify link.
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Comments (4)
What if we are all actually on a hugeeeee slide called Earth? Lol
Very nice indeed ✍️🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
This is a great senryu!
I so enjoy reading the talent that Vocal has. For you to be so concise and clear in so few words is beautiful.