
I walk slowly on the golden,
softly sun-kissed road.
Never have I been here,
set my foot on the ground.
But I must confess,
I have often stolen
a glance,
sometimes two,
when passing by.
My mind, in longing, found itself
seeking secrets in shadowed nooks.
There are hills and valleys up ahead
and an endless reach of fields.
They move
and breathe in harmony.
Perfection
from nothingness was built.
I passed a cave;
it lit a spark
in my gut and mind and heart.
A sudden wave of reverence
washes over my whole being.
My heart peeks in,
yet feet stay firm,
waiting for a sign,
a nod,
a whisper opening the door.
The mounds in ancient symphony
grow from the waving ground.
Nature’s work of art
pristine,
flawless,
pure,
spreading here before me,
until the horizon’s brim.
The steep rock hill I see beyond
rises from the ground to skies.
And curvatures, they’re meant to be,
embrace each other’s flowing lines.
The sunbeams catch
each millimeter
enveloped tenderly
in warm embrace.
The heat makes surface glisten
and smell of summer days.
Each step I take I find myself
more daring,
yet feather-light, to not disturb.
In awe of nature’s handiwork.
One gust of wind,
one gentle blow
reveals all that sculptured beauty
from beneath the chisel’s dust.
You tremble
and pull me from my wandering
through the primeval wonderland.
I find my fingertip has reached
the furrows,
the lines inside your open hand.
About the Creator
Cristal S.
I’ve noticed when I follow the path I enjoy most, I often end up swimming upstream. So here I am, right in the middle of it – writing about it all and more. ♡
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Comments (2)
Aw this is so sweet and gorgeous Cristal! Reminds us all why nature is so beautiful 🥰 And the blend with love is expertly done and just fills the heart with so much warmth. I'm hoping we'll be reading some more of your entries to these Summer Challenges (no pressure to write or anything, haha; always write what you want). 💛
This was so lovely and beautifully written! Loved it so much!