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Flashback of life Storms
Trauma brawling from within
Stuck in our memory
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (25)
Hi Marianne I look at the comments below and they are a testament in and of themselves. ‘Time capsules’ - such a unique application to Mental Health. Wow! I felt myself within … Pauline 🌸
Wow, this is wonderful, Mariann!
Brilliant work! BRAVO!
Outstanding
Great to read this! It’s really good too, with a relevant message. Don’t think I knew you back then as I’ve only been more active on Vocal this year.
Nice!! ❤️
well done and said in so few words
That they are - those storms 💜 Beautiful
Brilliant! Life storms could represent anything but they are valid and ours to bare.
So well said! A really beautiful and relatable piece! 💜 Great work, Mariann!
At least they are only stuck in our memory now. :)
Memories good and bad. Thay are our cross th bear, bear them well!
Ahhh, gotta love them thought capsules. Some of them surface at the wrong time. Loved it!
Well put. *hugs
That resonates.
Really powerful!
This is a very moving haiku!
Gosh, this was so relatable! It always happens to me. Hope you're doing okay my friend
Awesome!!! Loving it!!!
Very relatable to me. Well done Mariann!
Very nicely done.
Wow, you captured that perfectly! I wish I could unstick so many and be rid of them. Really well done :)
Inner turmoil beautifully captured. ❤️'d and subscribed
Am there with you
Very very deep!