Fill my Dimensions
A submission for Raymond G. Taylor's brevity challenge
This poem is my respond to the challenge prompt: ”Oh Jeff, I love you too, but..” - you can read about it here, because the picture matters! It is Roy Lichtenstein's "I love you but" from 1964.
I feel so square and dimensionally flat
You kill me with your charming chat
I want you to buy me diamonds and fullness
To take me out where I can be frameless
You should smoothe my jailing raster
First then you can be my master.
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Henrik Hageland
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Please forgive the clumsy cut and paste. I would like to publish your entry (or entries) to the Oh-Jeff challenge in an upcoming book and of course need your permission to do so. Details are all here: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/oh-jeff-the-book%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thanks, Ray
Wow, highly inventive and original take on the challenge. Really enjoyed reading this and loved the message. Well done.
Great poem and angle you took with this
Solid entry Henrik!
Bravo!!!!!
OH, this is so feisty. I love the smooth banter. Better ante up Jeff old boy.
Oooo, this was fantastic! Loved your take on the challenge!
Great stuff!
That is romance, Henrik!
Nicely done!
Cleverly done!