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Feel Like Shit

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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doesn't matter what i do

doesn’t matter what i say

the reason it is called inevitable

is because it will always be that way

and then for no reason

i feel like shit

but it matters what i do

and it matters what i say

everything is malleable

if you don't work you can't play

and then just like a kick in the guts

i still feel like shit

whose hurdles am i jumping

[feel like shit]

whose leg am i humping

[feel like shit ]

whose fist am i bumping

[feel like shit]

what habits am i dumping

[and i still

feel

like

shit]

the altitude of the attitude changes

and nothing else moves

and amid all this fattened strangeness

what can and can't be disproved

got a feeling and it's like it's shit

we need a list of approved habits

and we need it from the source

no distillation of this information

or it will be taken by force

and still at the end of a day

(feel)

if it’s gonna be that way

(like)

let's boogie let's play

(feel like)

and i'll show you today

(like fuckin)

i'll show you,

(shit! )

(#feelslikeshit)

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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