Forgot the reasons why I ever looked in your eye
Another reason to stay away
Victory glimpsed from the edge of the pit
Over which I loom
Unsure of the cost incurred by healing
Reeling from the memory of your touch
Itching for the ghost of you in my life
Tonight is the night I rise
Ever upwards before I fall again.
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Villainous whispers in the endless night
Incinerated hopes and washed out dreams
Corrupted by the weight of expectations and lies
Ever since I met you
About the Creator
Alexander McEvoy
Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)
"The man of many series" - Donna Fox
I hope you enjoy my madness
AI is not real art!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (5)
This seems like a partner piece to ‘Sinning’. Sharing the despair of addiction.
Ouch! 😔
This hurts to read, that feeling of longing you impart and the way you make that object of the narrators affection seem to unattainable.
"Itching for the ghost of you in my life" Oof, that line hit me so hard because of how relatable it was. Such a poignant and emotional poem. I loved it,a
It touches on deep emotional and existential aspects, amazing ✨